Thursday, April 25, 2013

Disturbed Soul.


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A Broken heart
Volcano of emotions
Disturbed soul

This haiku is written for 'Haiku Heights : April A2Z Heights Day 25' for the prompt 'Volcano'.

19 comments:

  1. So sad and so beautiful

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  2. Definitely identify with volcano of disturbing feelings. Powerful haiku.

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  3. I like your volcano metaphor for feelings.

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  4. Simple, yet powerful. Wonderfully expressed :)

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    1. Thank You, RB.

      Btw aap yaha? mere blog pe? WOW. Thanks ji... aapke time ke liye. :P

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    2. Lol haaww, don't say that :) I get busy with exams, is liye a nahi pati. But, thankU for writing such a beautiful Haiku ke mujhe ana hi parha :P

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    3. Just kidding. :P

      Now, Thank you there. I am glad that my Haiku brought you here. I am kind of honored. :D

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  5. brilliantly expressed! Keep writing!
    - - -
    Here is mine, if ypu'd like to read: Volcano.

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    1. Thank you, SJ. :)
      Its' like my second job now. :P

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  6. Such perfect words...:)
    keep writing..:)

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  7. A broken heart is difficult to mend !!!

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